Reviewer: misswelles (Signed) · Date: Jul 03, 2010 12:05 pm · On: Chapter 1

Wow! This is gorgeous!!! Loved it. The characterisation is spot on, and I could picture it all in my head.

Reviewer: Hedwig (Signed) · Date: Jan 07, 2010 2:05 pm · On: Chapter 1

Just reread this again; it's been awhile. Still enjoyed it this time around.

Though I have two itty bitty problems with it. One is no mention at all of Teal'c, though I'm assuming he was one of the "three bodies" that got tossed back through the gate at the beginning.

And the second is there's no explanation as to who took Sam and why they beat her like that. Would have been an interesting addition to the story to find that out.

Otherwise, still like the story.