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Reviews For Crying Alone
Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Mar 19, 2014 8:16 am · On: Chapter 1

touching

Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Jul 24, 2012 11:44 pm · On: Chapter 1

You can really feel the loneliness and despair in your story. The broken and repeated phrases; as if Sam is exhausted, really help to give this effect. This is a painful time in Sam's life, and you really helped us to feel and understand her pain.

Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Nov 12, 2011 12:33 am · On: Chapter 1

Very touching. You should keep writing.


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