Ooooh, a twist at the end!!!! Me likey!! So, I take it there may be a sequel in the works?

Btw, I am soooo jealous that you got to meet AT!!! I'm following her on Twitter and it sounded like an amazing event!!!! I wish I could have been there!!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, glad that you liked it, I decided to add it at the last minute coz I'm not sure when I'll get around to writing a sequal, I need to finish off a few other stories before I can write the sequal to this, but who knows, maybe I can turn one of them int a sequal for this. Thank you for reading and reveiwing, it makes my day to know that you enjoyed my story and that you took the time to leave me a reveiw. As for meeting AT, yes it was an amazing event, I've never experianced anything quite so amazing in my whole life; I even got to ask her a qestion, at which point I had to remind myself to breath before I passed out, lol, I was almost as nevous as when I had my photo taken with her, untill she gave me a hug and a kiss on the cheek telling me that It was ok and to take deep breaths, I was shaking like crazy lol. She is such an amazing person, who truly is interested and concerned about her fans, I passed on a message to her from my kids at the photo session and she told me to tell them hello, she also asked me a little about them, and I could tell that she was genuinely interested; I nearly fell over in shock the next day at the auto signing when she rembered not only my name, but my kids names, ages, and message; when I told her the reaction her message got from my kids and the fact that my seven year old son said to tell her that she was and I qoute, ' just so, absolutely beautiful ' her eyes welled up and she nearly started crying. She's such a wonderfull, caring and beautiful person, and I recommend that if you ever get the chance to meet her you grab hold of it with both hands and hold on tight.

Omg. I LOVE this story. I cant wait for more. U should become a screen Writer.

Author's Response: WOW what an amazing reveiw, thank you, it's an honour to know that you think i'm worthy to do something like that, I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story and still feel that way when you finished, you've just made my day and i'm walking on cloud nine now. hehe thanks, ;-D looking forward to hearing your thoughts on the rest of the story.

I really thought this was finished at Ch 3, which was fine. Glad you went on tho. But how come this has more words than the version on Heliopolis. Are there substantial differences. Are they both really complete?

Author's Response: Hi thanks for reading and reviewing, glad that your enjoying it, I've noticed that Heliopolis adds it up differently to here and to fanficion I don't know why, but nothing should be different, I do have to add extra spaces on Helio because of the formating, maybe it's that,I don't really know sorry; the story is complete, i'm just uploading it a chapter at a time and getting my husband to re beta each chapter it before it's uploaded; hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ;-D

Awwww... I love this!

Author's Response: ;-D I couldn't help myself.

Oh, btw... Do we get to see the reactions? Geez, I'm such a hopeless romantic! Glad to see the coughs better :)
I really need to work on Elvenpath. I might take my cue from you and start doing a chapter a day again :D

Author's Response: Sam and Jack's reactions? don't worry i'm right up there with you on the hopeless romantic scale, thanks for your well wishes; I've not read that story yet, but I'll be checking it out very soon, thanks for continuing to read and reveiw my story, looking forward to hearing your thoughts on the next one.

Ooooohh!!!! They finally got their feelings sorted! Does Pete get all narky and try to make Jack's life hell, or does he just drop it? Please, write more!

P.S. I hope the cough's getting better.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for the review, don't worry about Pete..........unless i do a sequal, Mwahaha, ;-D thanks for still reading and revewing it means a lot to know that so many people are still enjoying something that I wrote and are looking forward to seeing where it's going; can't wait to read your thoughts on the next chapter which should be up soon; and thanks for asking the cough is getting much better.

I like where i think this is going! XoXo

Author's Response: Lol you'll like the next one then ;-D i'm glad that you aprove the direction this story is headed, hopw you enjoy the next chapter.

Thank you thank you thank you! I liked this a lot :) Poor Jack and Sam... I hope they sort it out soon (And I hope you get to feeling better, the flu sucks :S)

Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw, don't worry all will be well ;-D i hope you ike reading the next chapter as much as i enjoyed writing it, feeling a lot better now thanks, just wish that i could shake this nasty cough doing my head in. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter.

This is the ONLY fanfiction i've been reading lately. It's great! Can we have more today? Please???

Author's Response: He he glad your enjoying it, thanks for reveiwing.

Please please please update! I keep checking for a new chapter every few hours! Please please please give us more!

Author's Response: Lol sorry for the wait i've not been well, the next chapter is up now, thanks for continuing to read my story, and thanks for the review.

Seriously, Jack should have punched the guy! Please tell me Sam does something next chapter and kicks Pete's butt for being such an arse?

Author's Response: He he, don't worry he'll get his comeuppance eventually, thanks for reading and the great reveiw.

Interesting story.... I'd really really like to see the ending....? Please please please?

Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw, i'm posting a chapter a day, hope you enjoy them as much as the others.