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Reviewer: GenVarel (Signed) · Date: Feb 04, 2012 9:56 pm · On: Day Seven of a New Life

Looking forward to how this story will unfold. Interesting so far, although a little slow in developing.

Author's Response:

Slow in developing as in you would like to see more time pass between the chapters so that more progress will be made, just me slow in updating or an overall slow pace of the plot? Or something else entirely? The focus of this story is mostly on Sam's missions, Colonel Jack's assignment and their interactions with each other, which all need time and careful planning and can't be done in a matter of days.

Thank you for the review and I'm looking forward to hearing more of your honest thoughts.


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