Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 27, 2012 9:15 am · On: Chapter 12

ugh I hate cliff hangers. lol more soon I hope.

Reviewer: KRel007 (Signed) · Date: Oct 27, 2012 3:51 am · On: Chapter 12

oh, I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 21, 2012 12:10 pm · On: Chapter 11

reviewed wrong chapter lol But can not wait to read more. Love it.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 21, 2012 12:09 pm · On: Chapter 1

Of course we want more that is awesome so far. love it. Got to see why she is so upset she should be happy.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 30, 2012 12:32 pm · On: Chapter 10

Very nice well done. It is perfect just as is don't know what could be done to make it better unless they could be together no worries. but it is just nice as it is too.

Reviewer: KRel007 (Signed) · Date: Sep 30, 2012 7:37 am · On: Chapter 10

definatly need more. where does their relationship go? does Hammond find out??

Author's Response: Wow, I will most defiantly have to think about that! Thank you! I have no clue when the next one will be out, but I promise there will be more!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 17, 2012 10:57 am · On: Chapter 1

Wow just got to read and catch up that was so cute and fun to read. Loved the light hearted get to know you moments. So perfect and seemed so right. Well written.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the feedback you give me. I shall add more moments like those in the next chapters... And even new stories, if you like them so much! Thank you so much for reading, you don't know how happy that makes me!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 09, 2012 10:10 am · On: Chapter 1

Still enjoying and waiting for more. Nice date loved it.

Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Aug 30, 2012 3:07 am · On: Chapter 1

See what happens when you make assumptions and don't let people answer for themselves? Shame on you Jack! Communication skills are what you need. Of course, there is communication, and then there is communication! Lucky for you Sam, seems to have them both mastered!!!
I sincerely enjoyed this short little piece. It was light, and well written. Thanks so much.

Author's Response: Thank YOU so much!! I try to make it as real as possible, as in how they act with each other.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Aug 29, 2012 9:48 am · On: Chapter 5

Just got a chance to read this story I love it so cute. Can't wait for their big date and to see what you come up with from Jack. I think the date should end on a positive note but as for ideas. Think of your idea of a perfect date think of the little blunders that can happen and let the characters overcome it. The next big step they could take it but they need to be relaxed and some of the tension and nervousness dropped. Play with it and have fun I am sure as readers we can take it. lol Great story so far.

Reviewer: KRel007 (Signed) · Date: Aug 06, 2012 3:14 am · On: Chapter 1

it can go places...curiousity has got me though. Since they can't tell anyone they are together...what's their first actual date without the guys there? Do they take their relationship in baby steps or leaps and bounds?

Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Aug 05, 2012 6:11 pm · On: Chapter 1

I think this should be somewhere around chapter 3 of a 10 chapter story. Hope you will round it out. Thanks.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Jul 16, 2012 12:38 pm · On: Chapter 1

Well that was a nice little opener of course we would like more. Don't leave it hanging there.

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