Reviews For Beyond Entrapment
Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Aug 09, 2013 5:47 pm · On: The End...

Still love the story!

Reviewer: Vash (Signed) · Date: Nov 26, 2012 1:52 pm · On: The End...

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was great to read about all the insecurities a pregnancy with a conception like that generates with Sam and I think you did it very well in character.

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Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 25, 2012 6:34 pm · On: The End...

Loved this story and a sequel would be great since it ended way to soon. lol Looking forward to reading more of your fics and to a sequel.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much, I had lots of fun plotting and writing it! Thank you for your reviews, I really appreciate them!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 21, 2012 7:02 pm · On: Conversations

Nice loving chapter. Love the interaction between Sam and Janet as well as Sam and Jack can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I felt those were questions that needed asking and as Sam's best friend and a good friend of Jack, Janet seemed like the perfect person to ask them. The second scene was a nice contrast with Janet's concern about Sam making this decision for the right reasons, in my mind, as it showed how comfortable and easily Sam and Jack went from 2IC/CO to lovers and being able to actually talk to each other without all that tension...

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 19, 2012 3:15 pm · On: Commitment

Love it so much better than all that abbortion talk,. Great story really enjoying it, Waiting for more.

Author's Response:

Pleased to hear it! The story is almost coming to an end, so you better enjoy the last few chapters before it's over!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 14, 2012 8:27 pm · On: Resolution

loved it Yes she is keeping their baby and taking a chance on them. Just love it. So perfect can not wait to read more and have them pull this all off now.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Sam has finally made up her mind and will do whatever she can to make a relationship with Jack work... More about that in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 12, 2012 8:22 am · On: Love

wow such emotion loved this chapter. Can not wait to read more.

Author's Response:

I'm glad I managed to convey all the emotions, as it can be tricky and is always a challenge.

Reviewer: Vash (Signed) · Date: Nov 09, 2012 5:31 am · On: Truth

I love how long it takes Sam to process all the information and how slow Jack is in finding out Sam's kissing him. They are adorable in their drama. I hope Sam will keep the baby and choose a life with Jack.

Author's Response:

Sam is quick on her feet when her/someone else's life or the planet is in danger, but when it comes to emotional stuff she's just a tad slower... Ah well, I guess I'd rather have it like this than the other way around or the planet would be doomed! Jack's brain probably short-circuited at the first touch and can you blame him, when it's been years since they last kissed and he's been madly in love with her all this time?

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 08, 2012 9:37 am · On: Truth

Love this chapter Poor Sam how confused she must be but dam lucky too!!! Can not wait to read more. Bring it on I am sure the angst is not done yet. lol

Author's Response:

I'm pleased to hear it. There were some things I wasn't entirely satisfied with but I couldn't pinpoint the problem to rectify it, so I kept it as it was; fortunately everyone so far seems to have enjoyed it. Sam's head is still spinning from everything (remember, the last 4 chapters all take place on the same day) but I do believe Jack is finally getting through to her in some degree.

I certainly have something special planned for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 04, 2012 8:19 pm · On: Consternation

Oh the venom I must say I hope Carter agrees to keep the baby and let Jack take her. Well written chapter the confrontation was amazing. keep up the good work and keep the story coming.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter will be right up!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 01, 2012 9:15 am · On: Confrontation

Well now there was a very hard confrontation though Jack did well hopefully Sam will come around to his idea. Great story amazing writing more soon I hope.

Author's Response:

It was and I was so looking forward to writing it for weeks! Does that make me bad? I guess i just like my angst... it's not over yet, either!

Thank you, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story so very much!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 29, 2012 2:22 pm · On: DNA

Oh no!! Poor Sam can not wait to see where you go now. Jack will not let her make a rash decision. This should be very interesting. Can not wait to read more. Keep it coming.

Author's Response:

I hope it will be very interesting! The next chapter will be all Sam and Jack and we'll see both of their point of views as Jack goes to confront her at home. Hope to have it finished and ready to go tomorrow.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 29, 2012 9:58 am · On: Shock

Whoa what a shocker but now at least Jack if DNA proves it can keep her from doing something she will surely regret. Can not wait to read more. more soon I hope.

Author's Response:

I think Jack is with you on that! Have you checked out the next chapter as well? I updated twice this weekend.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 25, 2012 10:25 am · On: Experiments

What a place to leave us how nasty. That is a cliff hanger that is just plain EVIL!!!!!! Post again Soon!!! Real soon I hope!!!!

Author's Response:

Muahahaa! Nah, just kidding; it was either end it here on a cliffy or keep the last scene out. Considering the options I think I made the right choice...

I'll do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 19, 2012 11:44 am · On: Decisions

Awesome chapter abortion though gee that seems not so Sam like lol waiting to see what happens now and how you go with this. This would be a hard decision for any woman to make but under the circumstances I understand the direction you have taken her character but I don't like it. lol more soon I hope.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I would have replied sooner but the site has been incredibly slow.

In the latest chapter we see Jack's thoughts about Sam's situation as Teal'c gets him to talk about what's bothering him while they're traveling home.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 12, 2012 3:27 pm · On: Proof

Wow now things are getting very interesting More soon I hope no long delays please!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Well, I hope to update again by Sunday but I can't be sure since I'm struggling with chapter 11 (it's gotten too long). Then hopefully I can update again on Wednesday.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 10, 2012 9:16 am · On: Revelations

ooh the wait to find out what happened is killing me. Well written but more soon please. Suspense it is time to know what is going on. lol

Author's Response:

Oh come on, I just gave you all some answers! :)

Can't give everything away at once, where's the fun in that? Let's hope I get plenty of writing done the following days so I can update again soon.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 06, 2012 10:11 pm · On: Discoveries

interesting eager to find out what is going on here

Author's Response:

I know there was a lot of medical info there, but it's important to the plot and this way I can refer to it later on in the story. Hope you will enjoy the coming two chapters as well, which will both deal with the sets of results.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 03, 2012 12:41 pm · On: Choices

Great reading so far and can not wait to find out what is going on. You have created great suspense here. More soon I hope.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! 

You know me, I love me some angst and suspense! I hope to have more soon too, but unfortunately this chapter was difficult for me to write (with the sensitive subject) so I've lagged behind on schedule. Am hoping to wrap up chapter 7 before I go to bed but I prefer to have at least two chapters done, in case of backup. So hopefully I'll be back on schedule by the weekend.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 26, 2012 12:14 pm · On: Contemplations

Nice chapter love it when Jack is such a sweetie to her. How it must lift her heart. lol if only!!! More soon I hope.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I thought this was a perfect opportunity for Jack to show that side of his, even though you know he's got to be angry and upset that someone did this to Sam. But he knows she needed a supportive friend, so he did what he could. 

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 25, 2012 12:58 pm · On: Support

Sputter sputter you stoped there!!! Ugh More soon I hope.

Author's Response:

Muahahaha! I've got to make sure to keep you guys interested, eh?

Next update will be on Wednesday, so the wait won't be very long for you.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Sep 17, 2012 2:47 pm · On: Intro

Very interesting can not wait to read where this one is heading. post more

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it so far and that you're anxious for more. 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz (Signed) · Date: Sep 17, 2012 3:07 am · On: Intro

Glad you are back posting. Missed you! enjoyed the first chapter very much.

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks! I'm glad to be back!

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as well.

Reviewer: KRel007 (Signed) · Date: Sep 16, 2012 5:44 pm · On: Intro

I can't wait to read more. Thank god the timing eliminates Pete (sorry but I can't stand him at all!)

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it!

I'm not sure there are any S/J fans that can stand Pete, so no worries! I felt I had to include him and basically get him over with because of the setting of the story and make it clear that there isn't going to a relationship between him and Sam like the canonical one. Mark is to blame for setting them up while Sam was still suffering from the effects of (cumulative) traumatic brain injury and feeling emotionaly vulnerable due to her hallucination-induced 'epiphany' aboard "Prometheus", so I felt one mistake (her words) before realizing what a bad couple they'd make and how stalkerish he can be was acceptable. Much more so than a serious relationship, let alone an engagement!

Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Sep 16, 2012 5:01 pm · On: Intro

You know I don't usually read WIP, but when your story popped up it looked like sunshine in an otherwise gloomy summer. The first chapter is great. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

I'm honored! ;)

My muse has let me down this summer, making me jump from one fic to another and now I have research and plotting (plus a couple of chapters) done for three different fics! I was planning on making sure I could focus all my energy and attention on this one by writing it completely, but once I wrapped up the third chapter and got the title I just couldn't help myself and needed to share. This one has been on my mind the past week, so I'm confident this is the one for now and shall move onto my other projects once this one is complete.

Hope you will continue to enjoy the story and looking forward to hearing your thoughts as it progresses!

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