Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Oct 31, 2012 12:41 pm · On: Chapter 1

Very sweet story. I enjoyed reading it, although more defined paragraph form would have made it easier.

Author's Response: sorry about that, I went braindead and had it saved as a word document and lost all the formatting when it went over to txt.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Oct 31, 2012 9:36 am · On: Chapter 1

Love it but somehow it so needed to include Hammonds response to the were married thing. lol Nice story.
You also don't mention how you got around the regs. Though it doesn't take from the cuteness of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was rushing because I really wanted to get the idea moving today. I came up with it and two hours later this was the result. I think I might do a second, more polished version of it later. As for the regs, while they are very confusing...the actual version of the air force frat reg does not prohibit relationships between officers. Though it would be frowned upon because they are in the same chain of command, there would be nothing to court martial them for.

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