Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed) · Date: Jan 07, 2014 4:46 pm · On: Just Dreaming

Great story! I'm glad it was all a concussion induced dream!

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2012 11:14 am · On: Just Dreaming

Interesting I enjoyed the story but I am as confused as Jack what was real.

Author's Response: YES!! It came out the way I wanted then. I was hoping to it would make readers sit back and wonder just what really happened.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Dec 18, 2012 7:37 pm · On: Murphy's Law

lol do you dislike poor Sam will find him.More soon I hope.

Author's Response: Oh no, I absolutely love Jack. I want him for christmas, lol. There is a very large twist to the whole story. I hope to have it all posted early this evening. Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Dec 18, 2012 7:33 pm · On: Truths

ooh angsty just a wee it. Sam is a little mean to Jack here.

Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Dec 17, 2012 2:40 pm · On: The smell of gunpowder

Very Interesting story so far can not wait to read more and see where you are taking us. Well done so far.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I wasn't too sure the direction I wanted it to go, but it seems to be writting itself. It will hopefully be complete this week, writting time vanishes after friday until after new years and that's just a cruel long wait for an ending.

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