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Rated: NC17
Summary: Another adventure brings our two heroes together in a way they never thought possible.

***This story is dedicated to a great man, a wonderful husband and a dedicated father, Arthur Fitzsimmons. He is and will always be sorely missed.
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: Captain Jack
Chapters: 7 | Word count: 16576 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 14, 2012 | Updated: Jan 18, 2012 | Read: 4720
[Reviews - 12] [Report This]


Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Darn those two ;) They do love each other I can tell...just cannot get themselves to open up to the other.

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoo Hoo another Captain Jack story, this fan is truly excited :)

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

There sure better be more Captain Jack, or I may have to come find you both and haunt you forever, I am addicted and loving every minute. Thanks P & Z you both are amazing authors :)

Author's Response: I admit it's pretty hard to deny a fan as true as you. We are considering your request, but right now P has other things to deal with, and I am writing a Western. The working title is "General Hammond's Wild West Show". In the meantime I will finish posting "Another Bad Day", and then I have had a request to post "When In Rome", so I may post that one next. Once again, thanx for always being here for us, Lynn. You are the best! hugs, P & z

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Jack is not the only one whom wants them to get away from Rodney...Daniel I can deal with...the lemon hater not so much ;)

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I will admit, I love a jealous Jack, but getting Sam pregnant just so she does not look at another guy does not seem to be a wise decision :(

Author's Response: What would I do without you! Thanx a million for the reviews. I am enjoying this sight with one exception; readers don't usually review. Why is that? I just don't get it. This is a great public forum for folks who like sam and jack, so why don't we communicate a little? Just saying...

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hot! Hot! Hot! and I love it :)

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh what fun trying is :)

Author's Response: Oh yes, I remember those trying days! Wish I could get them back.

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: What if Sam hadn't called off her marriage to Pete?
AN: Your words are the only payment I receive for all my work, so please be kind and review.
Genres: Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Word count: 70689 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 14, 2012 | Updated: Jan 26, 2012 | Read: 27341
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Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Nervous Jack, how adorable :)

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I was so not prepared for Ashley and the baby to die :( While she was not my favorite character (almost afraid to say that) having her out of the picture like this really was hard. Glad Sam is there to help Jack through the grieving, and to know that they will be a great family together with Katie.

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Jack, Jack, Jack...lucky for you I love reading Z's work or I would have abandoned you after this chapter - how could you have slept with Ashley again...will you ever learn?

Author's Response: Hey! Speaking for Jack here, I must say I'm hurt. You would abandon Jack? Say it isn't so! Okay, seriously, thank you for reviewing. Trying to get reviews around here is worse than trying to get the IRS to give me a refund. LOL

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

And things were going so well :(

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I kinda think I know what may happen with this one, but am not sure yet. While I know Sam has brought some of this on herself with accepting Pete's ring...they are both to blame now that they are not together - hope that changes :)

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Why oh why if Jack loves Sam so much does he keep sleeping with Ashley? I am just not understanding this... and Ashley deserves so much more than that if she knows he does love Sam.

Author's Response: I see Jack as a man who feels deeply for people, even though he may not always show it. He does love Ashley. He just doesn't love her in the same way he loves Sam. He feels responsible for Ashley, and for her situation, and when Jack feels responsible for someone, he can't turn away from them no matter how much he might be hurting himself. Remember the motto he lives by in the field? Never leave a man behind? Well, this is sort of like that. Also, he's got insecurities which are always nagging at him. So when Sam tells him how wrong he is for her, he can't see that she's just lashing back at him the only way she knows how. I know it's hard to see Jack with someone other than Sam, but remember, she's the one who accepted Pete's ring when she could have turned him down. What was Jack supposed to do, become a monk? He's a man with a man's needs, the first of which is to be needed by a woman, to be responsible for her and care for her, and Ashley is much more needy than Sam. I often think it was Sam's "I'm a woman, hear me roar" attitude that kept Jack and Sam apart in the TV show. Well, that and some dumb ass writers who were afraid of insulting the Air Force. And they're Canadians, for crying out loud!

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ok, I will admit you are slightly forgiven with this chapter, but I am still peeved at Jack hoping from one to the other...such a guy - lol!

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh Z, what are you doing to me...I mean ICK does he have to keep sleeping with Ashley?

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Really enjoying this, as it is always nice to see them inch closer and closer to admitting their feelings - but you still have me worried about Ashley..ugh!

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lots of angst I see, better prepare myself for more...lol!

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I know I will get pelted for this comment, but I was hoping Ashley was out of the picture, and then she shows up and Jack sleeps with her again... now I am mad a Jack -sigh!

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Gonna be a hard one to read for sure...now that Jack is trying to forget Sam with this dancer :(

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ugh! This is really hard to read :(

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At the first sign of Sam marrying Pete, I think I actually got sick - lol! But I know you, and you would never leave her down this trail of ickyness - looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hi, you! Yes, you are correct. But if I recall correctly, 'the trail' is a really long one in this story. I wrote this story seven years ago! I can't believe it's been that long. Where has the time gone? Anyway, thanx for reviewing! You just made my day. XO

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So close, but yet still so far away :(

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Noo, she cannot send Jack away - his heart and mine would be crushed :(

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok, I feel really bad now with all the bad thoughts I had about Sam marrying Pete :( Now to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: Lynn0319 Signed
Date: Jan 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Now why oh why would she want those romantic thoughts to disappear, I know I would not want that man out of my head :)