"Poem: Villanelle" By Alexandra

TITLE: Villanelle

AUTHOR: Alexandra writtenvoice38@Juno.com

RATING: G

SPOILERS: kinda for In The Line of Duty

ARCHIVE: SJD, whoever else, just ask

DISCLAIMER: All the usual stuff. Stargate SG-1 and its characters are the property of Showtime/Viacom, MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, Gekko Productions; etc. etc.This story is for entertainment purposes only, no money exchanged hands, no copyright infringement intended. Previously unrecognised places and characters, and this story, are copyrighted to the author. Any similarity to real persons, either living or dead, is coincidental and not intended by the author.

AUTHOR NOTES: Here's the other form of a poem that we've studied so far. It's called a villanelle and basically uses repeating lines. Nothing special. I got the idea from In The Line Of Duty, what will always be one of my favorite episodes!

FEEDBACK: Please let me know what you think.

 

Villanelle

 

A lone tear crashes on the windowsill,
The mental battle is being lost,
Broken is the world-weary will.

To fight each day with pain to fill
A mind suppressed by a demon.
A lone tear crashes on the windowsill.

With uncountable time to kill,
Horrors innumerable flood the mind.
Broken is the world-weary will.

His downcast eyes ignore her still,
His heart aching with her captivity.
A lone tear crashes on the windowsill.

Wishful cries go unheeded until
She breaks through for a helpless moment.
Broken is the world-weary will.

Hope reborn like a life giving pill,
She begins to fight for her life once more.
A lone tear dries on the windowsill,
Alive is the newborn will.

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