Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Sep 03, 2012 11:42 pm · On: Chapter 1

This is my 300th review, and I couldn't be happier that it is for your story. I really enjoyed it! It had a number of small plot lines that intermeshed, starting with the scene with Jack in Sam's lab before heading off to find Daniel, and ending with the 'promise' of a happy, short, medium and longterm future. Short term: playing with the artifact. Mid term: finding the achilles heal of the super soldiers and smashing them. Long term future: I think his kiss said it all! Thanks for your story. Keep writing!