Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Aug 17, 2012 4:23 pm · On: Chapter 1

Well done! Parts of this are very powerful. I especially love that Sam is risking her life for a cancer cure. No doubt the military are thinking "weapon", just like this ancient tribe, and the G'ould. But Sam is out there to save lives, and looses hers. The sequence before she dies is very powerfully done. It would have been nice to know something about the injury - loss of blood, broken bones, back or head injury - to be able to read into some of the various stages of loss she is going through - but it is not necessary. Thanks for this short - but sensitive story.