Reviewer: 12jennie (Signed) · Date: Dec 01, 2010 3:25 pm · On: Chapter 9: A Surprise Christmas Gift

oh i so loved this

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it thanks....

Reviewer: hellomy22 (Signed) · Date: Dec 16, 2009 1:49 pm · On: Chapter 9: A Surprise Christmas Gift

I love it. Great story. Merry Chrismas to you .
Kisses and good luck.
Jesica. XD

Author's Response:

Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Neferlue (Signed) · Date: Dec 14, 2009 8:08 am · On: Chapter 6: Hammond's Surprise Reaction and Solution

Ooh, my partner and I came up with an interesting plot twist... They say he's lying about some of the charges... Zay'tarc! They could say to anyone without clearance that it is a new lie detector they have been working on to be useful in interrogation of people with black ops training who are trained to resist lie detector teats, and has been shown to be highly accurate... Put Kinsey on one of them, and see the real truth come out!

Author's Response:

You should do it. I'll read it as soon as you have it up...

Reviewer: hellomy22 (Signed) · Date: Dec 11, 2009 7:09 pm · On: Chapter 3: CARTER The Nutcracker

Keep going , keep goijng. I love ti. XD XD

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it....Thanks for your review...I value my readers....next chapter up tomorrow....