Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Aug 29, 2012 9:48 am · On: Chapter 5

Just got a chance to read this story I love it so cute. Can't wait for their big date and to see what you come up with from Jack. I think the date should end on a positive note but as for ideas. Think of your idea of a perfect date think of the little blunders that can happen and let the characters overcome it. The next big step they could take it but they need to be relaxed and some of the tension and nervousness dropped. Play with it and have fun I am sure as readers we can take it. lol Great story so far.