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Reviews For Stargate SG-1
Reviewer: Alimoo1971 (Signed) · Date: Nov 05, 2012 1:19 pm · On: Chapter 1

This story is confusting to read. It hard to know who talking since there no " in this story like for exsample
"Walter." Gen said "come to my office right away please"

When it could be some thing like...

"Walter. Can you come to my office right away please" General said over the intercom


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