Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Nov 26, 2012 11:55 am · On: Chapter 16

This is such an excellent piece from you I am really enjoying it. Can't wait to see how you include Jack in this because in the movie it was his suicidal side that helped bring the stargate to life and with the new timeline he is not that way inclined. Really enjoying this.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. don't worry i got every thing plan out, enjoy this next chapter, your in for a surprise :D