Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Jan 06, 2013 7:35 pm · On: Chapter 57

Fun interesting how you incorporated both Sams parents in the tokra. Still though as Sam says repeatedly in 1969 changing the time line can have serious results. I know downer but it is interesting.to read your way around all of it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. As for changing the time line, it the memories that help them change it not them actily going into the past. But in this story, from there memories they decided to change it for the better, not only for them selves but for friends and family