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Reviewer: Awishaway (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2013 11:09 am · On: Chapter 68

Interesting but not the same with Jack staying behind on key missions. Why waste the time to go to come back right away she should have told them not to capture any of the critters before they left. interesting but waiting to see where you are going with this.

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