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Summary: Jack and Sam get a second chance at being together and saving the galaxy from the Goa'uld Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, General, Humour, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Original Archive Date: None Warnings: None Series: None Chapters: 98 | Word count: 213685 | Completed: Yes | Published: Nov 11, 2012 | Updated: Feb 17, 2013 | Read: 568474 [Reviews - 110] [Report This]
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Date: Dec 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Sam sure spends a lot of time away from her family. Interested to find out where you are taking us post more soon.
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Date: Dec 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Oh I hate car sales men like that met a few in my days. lol Can't wait to read more.
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Date: Dec 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Wow still wondering with all the adjustments to the timeline what will happen. Enjoying the story though think it would dramatically change the outcomes. Very interesting though. I still don't think Sam would allow for so many dramatic changes to occur not after her time in 1969.
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Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 OH sure stop as you hint at what she is going to blast the secretary. nasty. My comments re the time line or only because altering what is supposed to happen could cause major changes in what does happen. Though everyone is happy the changes are dramatic and I was only saying it was interesting cause you are making so many. Still enjoying your story though.
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Date: Dec 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Nice Saving so much time later. Waiting for more.
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Date: Dec 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ah yes interesting. General already nice.
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Date: Dec 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 oooh Hanson as a stalker interesting can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Date: Dec 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Interesting Hanson encounter Jack will not be a happy lad. lol . more.
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Date: Dec 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 The plot thickens!!!!Hummmm Can not wait to read more.
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Date: Dec 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 love it family fun!! Next!!!
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Date: Dec 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Interesting Jacks dad. well can not wait to see where we are going.
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Date: Dec 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Ah yes nasty Tom. how evil to treat your daughter that way. Jack and Sam will show you. lol more
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Date: Dec 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Ah yes nasty Tom. how evil to treat your daughter that way. Jack and Sam will show you. lol more
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Date: Dec 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Nice payback. lol good stuff more
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Date: Dec 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Interesting. I still think you are changing things to dramatically and that as a result things that didn't happen may happen now because she can not stop what never she doesn't know happened as a result of messing so badly with the timeline.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen.
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 okay now you are working around some of the problems the altering has created. Don't get me wrong, I understand what you are doing but know you have altered things so much that Sam does not know what is going to happen. Still enjoying the story. Just think with the dramatic changes She can no longer assume that what happened will happen. |
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