Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Apr 28, 2014 10:01 pm · On: Chapter 1

I like the story. I know you are not the first to have Sam lose her apartment over the 100 days. I can't really buy that. It usually takes a lot longer to evict someone. What's with all the Navy talk, "belay, aye?" This is the Air Force not the Navy.