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Reviews For The Betrayal
Reviewer: AgentKalGibbs (Signed) · Date: Oct 06, 2018 11:44 pm · On: Chapter 1
"What I can’t understand is why you couldn’t let me help you." - She bloody tried you jerk, it was you who didn't believe her! Jeez, she didn't betray the rest of the team, THEY betrayed HER.
Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Sep 09, 2014 11:33 am · On: Chapter 1
Honestly, I think this is too one-sided. After everything they've see and done, they don't believe her?! Jack doesn't trust her? They disobey orders all the time in similar circumstances. |
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