Starting Points by Jemma Rhodes

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Story Notes: E-mail: jemme_ring@yahoo.co.uk

Website: http://samandjackshouse.bravepages.com/

Season: Four

Spoilers: 2010

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Authors Note: OK. This is totally clichéd, sappy, and basically a load of crap! HOWEVER!! It is my first attempt at poetry, so any feedback with constructive criticism would be very much welcomed!!!! It’s Sam POV, then kind of goes to Jack…you see how!!! For Sam, who loves this ep!!

Date: 18/1/2003

I’ve so many things to say to you,

So many things to explain,

I wonder if you’ll ever forgive me

Please say that things can change.

I never meant to hurt you,

I did what I thought was right.

Can you ever understand that now?

Please try with all your might.

The words you say are harsh to me,

I hope there not really true.

Cause one thing is for certain now,

That I’m still in love with you.

I loved you from the beginning,

Through times both good and bad.

The problem is I’m married now,

But instead of happy I find I’m sad.

I plead, implore and beg of you,

To help up with our cause.

The Jack O’Neill I know would do it,

Will he open his doors?

What happened to that man I knew?

Was it I who drove him away?

Or is he still there, deep deep down?

Hidden waiting to say…

I love you Sam,

I never stopped,

Believe me when I say,

That when I left you all those years ago,

I was planning to come back some day.

I’m sorry that I never did.

I’m sorry if I broke your heart.

But we’re both here now, take solace in that,

Our lives can finally start.

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Feedback would be lovely seeing as this was my first attempt at poetry!! :)

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