You probably will never read this (and even if you do wouldn't care anyway) but in my opinion this fan fiction shouldn't be here. (not talking of the quality though)

Not that you give a crap anyway.

And two, cheaters are one the worse people in the word (just a little above pedophiles and murders) and deserve nothing, not that you give a crap, because according to you they are the saints and deserve honor and reverence.

If their where justice in the word Teal'c should have been castrated and hated for the traitor he was in your story and Sam deserve worst, not that you believe in Justice anyway but hey that is just my opinion.

And if you believe that getting a reaction is any indication of something being good you probable think that decapitating someone on TV is great television, in other words just because someone reacts to something negative (or positive) does not make it good.