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Rated: R
Summary:

Colonel Jack O’Neill grudgingly accepted his new orders; he’d just have to view Colonel Samantha Carter as yet another assignment. To Sam it was anything but an assignment; he epitomized everything she’d lost and she was hell-bent on righting this wrong.


Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, UST/Friendship
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 | Word count: 223846 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 22, 2012 | Updated: May 27, 2012 | Read: 35946
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Reviewer: sam1Helen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I am loving this story so far...Love "Macguyver Sam" ;) Only complaint is I need the next chapter faster. Also, alternate reality NID guys must be the worst surveillance people ever. Not sure how real that is but still love seeing Sam outsmart them. Kinda hope we get to "see" the look on Felger's face when he learns how easy sam got around his program

Author's Response:

Wonderful to hear! Trust me, if I could type faster you'd get the chapters faster too! It's not always the actual word count that takes a few hours but also getting the voices right and sometimes it's just the opening line that takes forever to come up with...

I'll be the first to admit that the NID tails are probably a bit too ignorant but I figured with everything that's happened Sam deserved a lucky break! Colonel Jack will address it in chapters nine and ten though...

Thank you for the review and rating, I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.