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Real name: Pauline Fitzsimmons
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Just a fan who wants to write Sam and Jack but needs to learn how.
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Rated: PG13
Summary: Sam plans a surprise trip to Washington DC with disastrous results.
Genres: Angst
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1941 | Completed: Yes | Published: Sep 03, 2009 | Updated: Sep 03, 2009 | Read: 2447
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have just read this story, which I enjoyed very much. But it was such a strange ending.Was that Jack in bed with some else or not. And if so, WHY!!

 

Rated: PG13
Summary: Sequel to "Changes." Jack and Sam's relationship grows, going through it's ups and downs with a little help from their SGC family. SamJack, DanielJanet.
Genres: Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Word count: 48936 | Completed: Yes | Published: Aug 22, 2011 | Updated: Aug 22, 2011 | Read: 3157
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Transitions

This is the second time that I have read your two stories, and they were just as wonderful as the first time. Please write more stories like that, us fans are still out here. Thank you once again.

 

Rated: NC17
Summary:

Jacob Carter is dying of cancer and wishes Sam married before he dies and she has only one suitor she could can possibly marry but the military won't allow it (takes place 2nd Season during "The Tokra")


Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Humour, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, UST/Friendship
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Word count: 9606 | Completed: No | Published: Nov 03, 2011 | Updated: Nov 08, 2011 | Read: 3864
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Wedding Plans

I will review on here, this is a great story and I love it, just wish that the 'old gang' would read and review.

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Rated: NC17
Summary: In this, the 3rd story in the Captain Jack series, a secret hidden since WWII is revealed.
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: Captain Jack
Chapters: 5 | Word count: 10945 | Completed: Yes | Published: Nov 25, 2011 | Updated: Nov 29, 2011 | Read: 3386
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: Nov 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know whether anyone liked this story as only 1 person bothered to review, is it worth my while to write a 4th story, just let me know.

Author's Response: The lack of reviews on this site does not reflect how much the readers liked it. As usual you are being too hard on yourself. Write the 4th story! xo

 

Rated: R
Summary: Episode Tag to Season 4 Episode, The Light. I always thought there was a lot more going on between Jack and Sam on that walk down the beach than was shown... Should be 3 Chapters
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Romance
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Word count: 6438 | Completed: Yes | Published: Dec 02, 2011 | Updated: Dec 02, 2011 | Read: 2207
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Babysitting

Welcome to the site, so glad that you decided to join. We need all the old writers from S&J tp come with their wonderful stories. Your story is great, I loved it. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome. GenVarel mentioned that she was posting on this site so I came and checked it out. I'm glad I did. I miss the community of the S&J site. I hope that it was just shut down and that nothing bad happened to Siler. I will post the third chapter in just a minute. Thank you again for the welcome. I'm looking forward to exploring and finding all the new stories I haven't read.

 

Rated: R
Summary: The rivalry between two ranchers brings death and mayhem to the normally peaceful town of Cheyenne Mountain.
Genres: Alternate Universe or Reality, Drama, Romance
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Word count: 29721 | Completed: Yes | Published: Dec 11, 2011 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011 | Read: 3763
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An excellent story, different, but with our usual beloved characters, Glad that you posted here!

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: Another adventure brings our two heroes together in a way they never thought possible.

***This story is dedicated to a great man, a wonderful husband and a dedicated father, Arthur Fitzsimmons. He is and will always be sorely missed.
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: Captain Jack
Chapters: 7 | Word count: 16576 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 14, 2012 | Updated: Jan 18, 2012 | Read: 4120
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You made a great yarn from my ramblings Z. Your deserve the full stars.xo

Author's Response: I can always count on you to perk me up when I'm down. You are special! xo ziva

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: What if Sam hadn't called off her marriage to Pete?
AN: Your words are the only payment I receive for all my work, so please be kind and review.
Genres: Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Word count: 70689 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 14, 2012 | Updated: Jan 26, 2012 | Read: 23191
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great Story Z. Loved it 5 years ago, love it now. Glad that you reposted.

Author's Response: You are very welcome, and thank you for saying it was your favorite story of mine. xo

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am going to give this five stars, because it deserves it. Thanks for re-posting Z.

Author's Response: As a friend and muse YOU deserve SIX stars! xo z

 

Rated: R
Summary:

Colonel Jack O’Neill grudgingly accepted his new orders; he’d just have to view Colonel Samantha Carter as yet another assignment. To Sam it was anything but an assignment; he epitomized everything she’d lost and she was hell-bent on righting this wrong.


Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, UST/Friendship
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 | Word count: 223846 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 22, 2012 | Updated: May 27, 2012 | Read: 30829
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Day Fifty Seven of a New Life

This is a great story, and I love it, can't waits between updates. It is very well written, like the way that you are handling the obvious attraction between Sam and Jack.

Author's Response:

Sweet! I'm very pleased with the responses I've been getting here (and on FFnet and AO3). It's always nice to hear people like my stuff.
Thank you for the compliments and I hope you will continue the rest of the story as well!

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Day Sixty Seven of a New Life

Oh my! that was a long awaited end to that chapter. Loved it ! look forward so much to your updates.

Author's Response:

I just love playing with Sam and Jack so much that I can't help myself but build a little suspense! Now it was finally time for some actual kissing though! 

Glad you're enjoying it so much, that's always nice to hear!

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Day Sixty Nine of a New Life

Another great chapter, what can I say but Wow ! More please asap.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it because it had been eluding me for days! Most of Sam's scene had already been written but I got stuck and eventually wrote the other 4500 words in a race against the clock when it was getting close to midnight here. I didn't want to skip an update so instead I made do with a little less sleep. Felt like a bit of a zombie this morning but luckily I can function pretty good with just a couple of hours of sleep! It's nice to know it was worth it though!

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Day Seventy Five of a New Life

Another excellent chapter. Regarding the love scenes, beautifully done. All in all a wonderful story, I look forward to each posting.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Good to know you enjoyed the love scenes, it was difficult for me to keep within the limits of the R-rating since I usually write either mature fics or K-rated ficlets/oneshots.

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, hope to have the next chapter up on Wednesday.

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Day Ninety Three of a New Life

This story is sooo good. and it keeps getting better, another new twist, with the pills. Excellent writing, can't wait for the next enthralling posting.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I had this little twist planned all along, just had to make sure I would actually *get* there and originally I was thinking of using Hammond. But since Maybourne will be back later to team up with Col Jack this was a better way and the NID probably wouldn't share such a secret with the USAF anyway.

Won't be long now until Sam and Daniel get their hands on the final piece of the puzzle!

Thank you for the kind words.

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Day Ninety Six of a New Life

An other good chapter, and you posted it early, from me a big thank you. Now I am wondering who answers the phone as Jack is there. Oh !

Author's Response:

Thanks! I was on a roll and had been thinking about the Sam/Jack scene for a while so I didn't want to stop when I finally got there. From there it wasn't that much trouble to add Daniel's little scene too and then I figured I might as well upload it as well!

We'll find out in the next chapter who answered the phone and what is going to happen when Jack learns the truth about 'Therra Carlin'...

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Day Ninety Seven of a New Life

Brilliant chapter, liked the way that you bought in the abandoned spaceship that Martin was on, clever !! Now that I have finished this chapter, better get on and do something, this story is addictive. Thanks for the quick update.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Martin's escape pod had already been mentioned and futzed with by Sam in chapter 14 so I had to refer back to it! It was the perfect distraction as Sam and Daniel made a run for it, but clearly Sam hadn't counted on Jack digging deeper into the salvaging company and her other alias.

I'm probably as excited as you are about the story so it's easier for me to get those last few chapters 'down on paper'. Hope to update soon. Thank you for the reviews, I appreciate them!

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Day Ninety Eight of a New Life

It puzzles me why the readers on this site do not review, strange ! Anyway great chapter again, your version is far better than TPTB and thanks for posting so quickly.

Author's Response:

I don't know either! But at least the stats indicate a steady number of readers per chapter, so I assume people are enjoying it enough to come back. Or at least not hate it so much they stop reading.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More angst, drama and arguments in the next chapter as the three of them are aboard the ship.

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Day Ninety Eight Continued

Every thing is unfolding nicely, but troubles to come I suspect. Another excellent chapter. gripping story.

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it. This one took me longer to write than I expected and resulted in a higher word count, so I'm saving the rest for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: May 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Day Ninety Nine of a New Life

I feel sad that this story must be nearly over. You have put a lot of hard work and thought into this. Well done, but I feel for the AU Jack !

Author's Response:

Yeah, it won't be much longer now until this baby is complete! Thanks, great to know all my effort is appreciated.

It's indeed a sad situation for poor AU Jack. Unfortunately there isn't a happy ending for everyone...

 

Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: The End...

Ah! The end ! I have really enjoyed your story. I now look forward to your next one, your stories are always something that you can get your teeth into, if you get my meaning !

Author's Response:

Yeah, I finally wrapped this baby up! :)

I'm glad to hear it, I really enjoyed writing and sharing it too. Not sure yet what my next (long) fic is going to be about, I have plenty of story ideas but haven't been able to choose the next one yet, but hopefully I'll be back with something soon.

Thank you for all your reviews and kind words, I really appreciate it!

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: This is one for those of you who enjoy Westerns. It has been posted elsewhere before.
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Character Death, Rape/Non-Consenual, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 18 | Word count: 44912 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 27, 2012 | Updated: Jan 27, 2012 | Read: 7994
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Let me be the first to review, good yarn, love the way you have incorporated the names into the story. Any story with Sam and Jack in is always a winner, well done for imagination.

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: It's a time machine story I wrote a few years back, folks. Some of the characters are from the HBO series, ROME.
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe or Reality, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Word count: 30739 | Completed: Yes | Published: Jan 29, 2012 | Updated: Feb 01, 2012 | Read: 8368
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

With Helio closing down, please support the Authors on this site, it doesn't take a minute to review and it means so much. We have to keep Sam and Jack going.

 

Rated: NC17
Summary:

Rodney McKay makes a pass at Samantha Carter and Jack O'Neill takes exception to it.


Genres: Angst, Drama, Humour, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Smut & Porn, UST/Friendship
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Word count: 5607 | Completed: Yes | Published: Feb 14, 2012 | Updated: Feb 16, 2012 | Read: 6021
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What a shot

Glad you are back Adelie, nice little story.

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Rated: NC17
Summary: Just a little something smutty that I wrote back when I was using another pen name. Enjoy!
Genres: Alternate Universe or Reality, Romance, Smut & Porn
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4365 | Completed: Yes | Published: Feb 14, 2012 | Updated: Feb 14, 2012 | Read: 3110
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had forgotten this one, loved it. Got any more tucked away?

Author's Response: I've got a ton tucked away, so I will dust off some more and post them as soon as I can. As you know, I've been sort of busy. ;) Thanks for reviewing! xo

 

Rated: NC17
Summary: Jack finds more than just a job in Bisbee, Arizona. AN: This one's a tale of the Old West, featured our two heroes, Sam and Jack. For those of you who think they don't like Westerns, I hope you will give it a try anyway.
Genres: Alternate Universe or Reality, Angst, Drama, Romance
Original Archive Date: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 | Word count: 47633 | Completed: Yes | Published: Feb 21, 2012 | Updated: Mar 02, 2012 | Read: 11030
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Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good to see another western story from you' Z'. Good to have something different, but with our hero's playing the main roles. An excellent start.